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cool

the only problems i see are the lack of sound, which i am guessing is due to the WIP nature of this, and the lack of a thumbnail image. I almost never look at anything without a thumbnail. Anyway, cant wait to see this finished!

MOAR!

aveus128 responds:

it seems like a bit too much work to thumbnail for it, but you get the idea at least, thanks for the 8/10!

not bad

I give you major props for writing this song, it was pretty catchy, especially the intro. If i was doing this, i would have waited until the animation was done to upload this. I understand that this is a WIP, but it still feels like at this point it belongs in the audio portal rather than the flash portal.

Nice voice acting

and some of the artwork was very cool as well. however, there were a couple of flaws, for example, a majority of the animation was basically two frames long, i would suggest adding more in-betweens. and also, why did you even upload this trailer here if the full episode is already uploaded? for more publicity? it just seems rather redundant to me.

smbhax responds:

Whoa, somebody actually complimented the voice acting! :o Thanks!

Totally redundant! But I'm making them for my own web site--so people popping in can just get a quick preview of an episode--and figured I might as well put them here since...well, since I've got them! Besides they do seem kind of handy, since you can't skip ahead in Flash (well, I'm not that sophisticated to make a skip control), if you aren't sure you want to invest in watching a full 8 minute episode, you can just check out the minute-long trailer to see if it'll be worth it.

Really I started making them because since my full episodes lately (as of episode 5) are too big to put here on NG (and deviantART, although actually I'm not sure if dA has a size limit...), I have to make small trailers for those...so I figured I might as well be complete about it and have trailers for all my episodes.

And yeah a little extra publicity couldn't hurt. :o

the wait for the load isnt really worth it

i mean its cute, and strangely good, but the length compared to the file size is really uncool and annoying. Also, as a matter of interest, what exactly does rockleefanlj think ur referencing?

meh

it was okay, but the jokes werent that funny, except for the giraffe in the list of inventions, that was pretty good... The main thing that bugged me was that the voice quality was way sub-par, maybe buy a new mic or borrow a friends next time. If i had made this i would have also have added some cheesey 50's jingle in the background.

nice, but enlighten me...

why are you boycotting l4d2? wats wrong with it? anyway, nice, but next time, redraw the guns for the first person view, rather than using free transform on them...it just looks cheap... =[

StealthBeast responds:

It wasn't free-transform, it was distort.

As for the L4D Boycot..

All can be humorously summed up here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GQe4tl sfRbY

lmao

the funny part is that this would be the probable outcome of N. Korea trying to attack the U.S. and that includes the massive 'roidasaurus arms and the hammer...

Sh0T-D0wN responds:

"Roidasaurus" lmao.

lol wut

say, isnt that the thing from stickfigures on crack? anyway, this was pretty good animation, just short and no story whatsoever...you clearly have talent, make longer toons

excellent

the whole concept of a bustling metropolis growing from little or nothing reminds me a lot of the game Black and White 2, which lucky for you is one of my all time faves. and i agree, the detail was absolutely amazing, could you estimate about how long it took you just to draw them? The only problem i noticed was some of the minor character animation was flawed, like his hair blowing in the wind was a little off. but seeing as this was such a small problem, i still gave you the full ten, you deserved it =D

CircusFreakFlash responds:

Yea. I noticed the hair too... I really wanted to be done with it though. I was sick of looking at houses. It turned out okay I guess tho :D.

disturbingly awesome

stupid dog, whats he doing looking like a cupcake??? NOOB!!! lol

anyway, very nice, good animation, good music, good ect...
the only problem is that it was a little short...oh well, its ur choice i guess...

TheBoogley responds:

dog is noob? HA! :D

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