wow i love this
and now i totally understand step 4 yay! The writing is what blew me away..i loved that scene towards the beginning where she pops out of the present all excited and he is just like "ok lets get this over with..." the emotions were conveyed beautifully, and this is one of my all time favorite, right up with brackenwood. PS does anyone have any idea wtf the guy below me is talking about? O.o