it was interesting, but why was the machine doing that? the how was explained, but the why left much to be desired :(
Though the variety was a little distracting, perhaps tone the differences down a little....
This was really good for a first flash, nice song choice and timing, good artwork, the only major problem was that the animation was a little lacking.There were points where you used motion tweens instead of walk cycles, and that is really visually distracting from the story.
I got lazy by the end, hence the tweens ^^; But thanks
and with a score to match! 4.83, now that MUST be some sort of record :D
Anyway, this was excellent, the acting, the animation, and it was great to learn a little more of bitey's past. However, the cliffhanger ending was indeed annoying. But all of this is eclipsed by the newly announced BRACKENWOOD FEATURE FILM!!!!
I cannot wait :D
excellent use of the rick roll :D
ive always loved this ever since i first saw this however many years ago it was. The way you conveyed the passage of time was absolutely genius. For some reason though, and this has absolutely nothing to do with anything, the sound with him eating the cereal always makes me cringe because it sounds like he is chewing on his spoon lol
I am saddened to hear that the series is over, and i think many fans of the series will agree. its just a bit of a bittersweet moment. Anyway, this was a really nice ending to this series, it showed a lot about the characters that we did not know yet. I liked this more than Junior, but not quite as much as Jackie or Jerry, because there were a couple of parts where Jerry was actually happy, which i guess is deserved, but still seems to go against what the rest of the series has established. I really did enjoy the bit between Jerry and his dad, that just helped define the characters so much, sort of showed how they tick. The one little thing that I would have changed if I had made the series is that I would not have made Jerry talk, it just felt so out of place, and took me out of the story for a second. I also enjoyed the scene where Jerry's mom is being, well, motherly. I know it was a little mushy and all, but it, again, defined the characters, and also added a little more kick to the closely following blow to Jerry's already damaged psyche. I would suggest, if the series were not over, that you make a story of Jackie's childhood next, but thats never gonna happen. Which is sad :(... Anyway, I enjoyed this, its definitely going straight into my fave's. And sorry for the eye-numbingly long review :D
PS: I am glad that the apple was delicious :D
but the story was a lil slow for my tastes, most of the scenes seemed unnecessarily long. but the artwork was good and the voice acting was excellent. keep it up!
thanks, will do!
its pretty sad how often crap like this happens when ur having a political argument. and yea yea, the audio wasnt the best quality, but u already know that.
but it was practically the same story as before, with a slightly more detailed robot. I hop the 3rd installment will be more original. The one thing i really liked was the part where it sort of revealed where the tetris blocks were coming from, those were pretty cool. maybe have the stick dude explore that aspect of the world youve created next and perhaps even try to end the rain of tetris blocks once and for all? i am definitely looking forward to the next one!
newgrounds is really for flash
but im still willing to review this. This was good, especially if you actually made the models yourself (did you?) but both punches looked really similar and also they were both a bit robotic. id try and make the punches feel more natural (i.e. more fluidity, add a bit more weight into the punch, ect...) maybe even try to expand into stories soon? theyre always great practice and tend to get better scores.
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